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She draws her paper heart
over and over again.
Maybe one day,
she hopes,
he will see it
and she hopes
he realizes who it was drawn for.

Her heart rips and tears
when he looks her way.
How can he not see?
Oh, how her heart rips and tears.
She will not cry today.

When it is all said and done
his love is gone.
And she's all alone
with no where to go.

She drowns her sorrows
with doodles of hearts and stars
her hopes and dreams are shattered.
He's leaving her behind
with another girl on his arm.
Her hearts are broken
and her stars are black.

Her heart rips and tears
when he looks her way.
How can he not see?
Oh, how her heart rips and tears.
She's going to cry today.

When it's all said and done,
his love is gone.
And she's all alone
with no where to go.

He doesn't see the hurt
that lies in her eyes,
he doesn't see the need
of him to be by her side.
He doesn't realize
that he'll never be loved
like she loved him.

Her heart rips and tears
when he looks her way.
How can he not see?
Oh, how her heart rips and tears.
Tomorrow's a new day.

When it's all said and done
she is gone
and he's all alone
with no where to go...
5.19.2010
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lawanda Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2011
This is so cute. I love it.
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CosplayerLaseatia Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2011
Aw! Thank you. [:
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wakemeup60 Featured By Owner May 21, 2010
This is a really beautiful piece =D :heart: I think I may have a few corrections. first stanza, fisrt line, I think it should be she draws a paper heart. second to last stanza first line, should it be her heart? =D Regardless of errors, good job!! =D
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CosplayerLaseatia Featured By Owner May 21, 2010
Thank you for pointing out the errors, I actually noticed that the first line was wrong, but I got distracted at some point in time while I was correcting it.
And I am glad that you enjoyed it.
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wakemeup60 Featured By Owner May 21, 2010
You're welcome. I hope I found most of them to save you the trouble of reading through it. Great poem! =D
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CosplayerLaseatia Featured By Owner May 21, 2010
I have probably read through the poem a million times. xD I just can't translate what I had on paper to the computer screen. xD
And thank you, again.
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wakemeup60 Featured By Owner May 21, 2010
I'm the same way =D lol. You're welcome XD
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CosplayerLaseatia Featured By Owner May 21, 2010
LOLz! Whoot! Bad typers unite! JOKE JOKE! xD
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wakemeup60 Featured By Owner May 22, 2010
Haha!! =D That's the truth! UNITE!! XD
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Ketsu-neko Featured By Owner May 21, 2010
beautiful :(
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