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.070 67 percent 'Lost Cause'

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Sixty-seven percent of my heart
is lost to hopes
and dreams
of him
coming back to me.
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This is my third attempt on the one hundred theme challenge. I know that I am going really slowly, for those of you who are, for whatever reason, keeping track of my progress.
I can't comment much on it. I hate short poems, but for some reason, this one worked for me.
When I wrote this, I was pining after my ex extremely hard. What a great way to end the year! OTL
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I really, really enjoy this poem. It's gets the meaning across easily, but is said quite beautifully.